Information on Redemption Essays - Recap

I know that it is getting a bit confusing what is going on with the "Redemption Essays," so I would like to take a minute and summarize what is happening. Sorry if you are embarrassed that I posted this information, but I want it to be clear.

First: If you scored above a 70 on Essay #2, you do not have to turn in a so-called "Redemption Essay" on Thursday, as you did well enough that you do not need redeeming.
(Elizabeth, Jamie, Christian*, etc.)
Of those people who scored above 70, if you scored above 74 you will be entitled to some privileges later in the semester.
(Alex, Abe, Ashley, Brandon, Jerry, Jessica, Melanie*, and Ranim)
If any of you would like to do a revision of this essay anyway, standard procedures still apply.
(Highlight your changes and Turn it in as a hard copy to me before the end of the year.)

Note: If you have an asterisk (*) next to your name, it means you are suffering from some deductions, but you still managed to get enough points that you do not have to turn in your revision by Thursday. I recommend you address those issues before you turn in your final revisions of Essay #2.

Second: For those of you not exempt from the Redemption Essay, I would like the first couple of pages to be the new Outline and then you can go right in to the Essay itself. Do not make them two separate documents, but please observe standard formatting for your header, page numbers, margins, etc. Even though some of you guys have turned in both outlines (Rough and Revised), I would still like you to make one more outline, as I believe it will help you with structuring your paper and organizing your ideas. (I will be expecting these people to submit an essay under the "Redemption Essays" tab on TurnItIn.com before 11:59 pm on Thursday (11-19): Sam, Gabriel, Max, Emaan, Kevin, Bryce, Alexandra, Olga, Danie, Nicole, Dylan, Claudia, Manny, Sarah, Speros, and Tyler)

(Special case instructions: Dylan, you do not need to include a new outline. Emaan, your essay is due Sunday before 11:59 pm; do not worry about the "late" next to your name, as long as you turn it in by then, you will be fine. Manny, I am still expecting a rough draft by email this evening.)

Third: Highlight your changes. If you change something like a word, add a sentence, or anything minor like that, I would like you to highlight that change. If you create an entirely new essay, you do not need to highlight it. If you create a new paragraph, within your existing essay, you only need to highlight the first and last word. I hope that makes sense.
(Example: much like the way bold was used in that last paragraph.)

Note: Everyone that failed to come to peer review and/or did not email me a rough draft will not be able to redeem those points -- they are lost forever. Peer review is a valuable tool.

I hope this clarifies everything. If not, you should send me an email -- immediately!
Good Luck. Remember this assignment exists because I want you to do well.